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The poem which she like most, yet is untitled.

20:39 Jan 17 2008
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Reworked and reposted, now with a title I like.









Delicate snow falls,

Like the sparkles missing from my life,

They escape with the wind,

I try in vain to hold on,

But melting in my palm,

They are gone before the pattern is even a memory.





Watching a graceful descent from heaven,

As young souls might take up their bodies,

So do the flakes settle to their comfort,

Pure brilliant and glorious white.





With gathering pace and flurries of haste,

The wind whips up toward a sting,

Filigree petals become droplets of ice,

Lashing my features into a frown,

Bearing my soul down and into the ground.





It's wet and cold out here alone,

Streets are noisy this side of town,

But the snow makes it all seem so clean,

Not as wrong as I know they have been,

This life is deception from the future I seek.





There is but only one path through the drifts,

Golden it shines,

Like honey in a sunny noon,

I follow where the light brings me to,

But its a tunnel of mystery,

With no end.




COMMENTS

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Nightgame
Nightgame
20:47 Jan 17 2008

You take me on such journeys with your words. You make me glad I am a fan of mysteries.





KCRC
KCRC
21:04 Jan 17 2008

Bravo!



I have no comment so eloquent as Nightgame's.



Just Well done.





LadyChordewa
LadyChordewa
22:43 Jan 17 2008

LOL all i can say is Ditto!!! lol



Joli
Joli
06:08 Jan 18 2008

Such a title. Such a heart. Such a man.





queenmorbid
queenmorbid
14:50 Jan 18 2008

Stabb you write so beautifully *sigh*





haleyalley
haleyalley
03:12 Jan 19 2008

i love it =]





darkicewolf
darkicewolf
04:03 Jan 19 2008

Love it babe





BubbleGumClaudia
BubbleGumClaudia
13:30 Jan 21 2008

Damn Stabb...I Wish You Could Write For Me!!





LadyRavenous
LadyRavenous
11:13 Jun 09 2008

Stunning and bids one wonder, what is the future you seek?








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